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2022-04-22 · 첨삭 강사 Donna

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HOMEWORK: What will you do when you see a crime? Answer in a few sentences. When I see the spectacle that someone commit a crime, It makes me sweat and nervous. If it is a big crime, I call to 112 promptly. Thank you Donna! Have a lovely weekend.

강사 첨삭

Good evening, [이름] Ju!

Witnessing a crime is scary but this time, we have to think critically if we can help someone or we might get hurt. You are right, calling the authorities is one of the best solutions because they are experts in these situations.

Thank you very much as well to your efforts and hard work this week! This homework was very good!

See you in class again.

-T. Donna =)

When I see the spectacle that someone commit a crime, It makes me sweat and nervous.

>> When I see a spectacle that someone is committing a crime, it makes me sweat and nervous.

If it is a big crime, I call to 112 promptly.

>> If it is a big crime, I will call 119/ 112 promptly.

Thank you Donna!
Have a lovely weekend.

>> Correct!

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