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I think gun control is absolutely necessary.
If anyone could have and use a gun, more crime would occur.
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Hello there [이름]!
I totally got your point because there are many countries where the use of gun is legal and that\'s one of the reason why crime rate is increasing.
Thanks for this!
Aki~
I think gun control is absolutely necessary.>>> CORRECT!
If anyone could have and use a gun, more crime would occur.
If anyone could have and use a gun, more crime would occur.
>>> CORRECT!
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