HOMEWORK:
학생이 쓴 원문
Q. Tell me something about your job, when it becomes exciting and when it becomes boring.
My job is buying a webtoon from china and service it in Korea.
what I have to do at first is searching an interesting comic book. Sometimes I read more than 50 books a day, It\'s a hard work because i have to read it on Chinese, But I don\'t hate to do.
The jobs make me feel boring is not a hard work, but It\'s a simple routine work, like uploading new chapters and sending emails.
강사 첨삭
Hi Jane!
While reading you homework, I feel that you have an amazing job because you can read Chinese characters.
Well, everyone has a unique job, we just have to find something that would spice up our routine :)
Please check those suggested sentences for your improvement.
Take care. See you on Friday ^^
T. Aki~
My job is buying a webtoon from china and service it in Korea.
>>> My job is to buy a webtoon from china and service it in Korea.
What I have to do at first is searching an interesting comic book.
>>> CORRECT!
Sometimes I read more than 50 books a day, It\'s a hard work because I have to read it on Chinese, But I don\'t hate to do.
>>> Sometimes I read more than 50 books a day, It\'s hard work because I have to read it in Chinese, But I don\'t hate to do it.
The jobs make me feel boring is not a hard work, but It\'s a simple routine work, like uploading new chapters and sending emails.
>>> The job just makes me feel bored is not hard work, but It\'s simple routine work, like uploading new chapters and sending emails.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.