Homework
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I think many parents want to their son or daughter are doctor and lawyer.So I guess some doctor and lawyer follow their parents’ lead.I think few official and teacher are following their parents’ lead too.
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I think many parents want to their son or daughter are doctor and lawyer.
>> I think many parents want their sons or daughters to be doctors and lawyers.
So I guess some doctor and lawyer follow their parents’ lead.
>> So I guess some doctors and lawyers followed their parents’ lead/ advice.
I think few official and teacher are following their parents’ lead too.
>> I think a few officials and teachers followed their parents’ lead/ advice too.
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