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2022-04-29 · 첨삭 강사 Donna

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HOMEWORK: Do you think you need a vacation right now? Answer in a few sentences. Social distancing has recently been lifted , so many people has began to take a travel. I wanted take a vacation in a few months ago. But now, I\'m not willing to take a vacation because I\'m satisfied with resting for about two days a week right away. Thank you Donna. Cheers to the weekend too!

강사 첨삭

Good evening, [이름] Ju!

All of us are itching to go somewhere far and that is alright. However, we still need to be careful due to COVID-19. All we need is to be safe so we won\'t be sorry.

If you would get the chance, go somewhere far, somewhere beautiful. This enriches our soul and improves our creativity.

Have fun over the weekend!

Thank you so much for your consistency and dedication.

-T. Donna =)

Social distancing has recently been lifted , so many people has began to take a travel. 
>> Social distancing has recently been lifted , so many people have began to travel. 

I wanted take a vacation in a few months ago. 
>> I wanted to take a vacation from a few months ago. 

But now, I\'m not willing to take a vacation because I\'m satisfied with resting for about two days a week right away.
>> Correct!

Thank you Donna. Cheers to the weekend too!
>> Correct!

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