homework
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HOMEWORK:
What makes a vacation enjoyable? Is it the place, activity, people? Share your answer in a few sentences.
I think what makes the vacation enjoyable is above all. That three factors are vital to enjoying a vacation, so I can\'t choose only one. The wonderful vacation is spending revive time in magnificent place with our loved people.
Thank you Donna! call it a good evening.
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Hello! Good evening, [이름] Ju!
I certainly agree that the three elements given on the question equal to an unforgettable vacation. If we are lucky to have them all, then, that is a perfect one.
Anyway, I have a few suggestions to make on your homework below. Do not forget their patterns and always use them when you speak. Great job!
Have a wonderful evening. Yes, let\'s call it a night. See you!
-T. Donna
>> I think what makes the vacation enjoyable is all of the above.
That three factors are vital to enjoying a vacation, so I can\'t choose only one.
>> Correct!
The wonderful vacation is spending revive time in magnificent place with our loved people.
>> A wonderful vacation is spending some revival time in a magnificent place with our loved ones.
Thank you Donna! call it a good evening.
Thank you Donna! call it a good evening.
>> Thank you Donna! Let\'s call it a night.
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