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2012-02-29 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

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1) If I study,I will pass the exams. 2) If the sun shines,we will walk to the town. 3) If he has a temperature,he will see the doctor. 4) If my friends come,I will be very happy. 5) If she earns a lot of money,she will fly to New York. I know how to buy some things cheaper. So when my friends buy some things, they call me. I search at the price comparison site. I check a coupon they can use. I also check whether a credit card can be collected the points or can be discounted the price. After all check, I tell them how to buy the most cheapest. And I usally collect the points. How can I get them? haha.. Every shopping mall has their own sale policies but they are similar. If I log in the shopping mall site, they give me either ponits or discount coupon. Specially, internet duty free shop gives a lot of points. But when People only go abroad, they can buy somethings there. Last Hong Kong traveling,I bought a purfume that's price was 100 thousand for 20 thousand.

강사 첨삭

Hello Miss. [Name], what a skill you have!:D I really want to know how to buy things in the cheapest way..But thank you for letting me know,kkk.. And about your composition my dear,ofcourse,job well done again for that! Keep up the good work Miss. [Name].. Talk to you again later my dear.. Teacher Cam^^   1) If I study,I will pass the exams. >>correct2) If the sun shines,we will walk to the town. >>correct3) If he has a temperature,he will see the doctor. >>correct4) If my friends come,I will be very happy. >>correct5) If she earns a lot of money,she will fly to New York. >>correctI know how to buy some things cheaper. >correctSo when my friends buy some things, they call me. >>correctI search at the price comparison site.>>correctI check a coupon they can use. >>I check some coupns which they can use.I also check whether a credit card can be collected the points or can be discounted the price.>>correctAfter all check, I tell them how to buy the most cheapest. >>After checking, I tell them how to get the cheapest.And I usally collect the points. >>And I usually collect some points.How can I get them? haha.. >>correctEvery shopping mall has their own sale policies but they are similar. >>correctIf I log in the shopping mall site, they give me either ponits or discount coupon. >>If I log into the shopping mall site, they give me either points or some discount coupons.Specially, internet duty free shop gives a lot of points.>>correctBut when People only go abroad, they can buy somethings there.>>correctLast Hong Kong traveling,I bought a purfume that\'s price was 100 thousand for 20 thousand. >>The last time I went to Hong Kong, I bought a perfume having an original price of 100 thousand but I only bought it for 20 thousand.  

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