Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
-What makes you happy? Explain your answer in five sentences.
What was your most recent travel experience.Explain your answer in five sentences.
1. First, I think my friends are very important for my happiness, because I like to talk a lot with them.
When I spend time with my friends, they make me comfortable and happy, talking funny stories to me.
Second, outcomes that I made such as my exam scores or drawings. They help me to think \'I\'m valuable person.\'
2. I have been Thailand with my family when I was in elementary school.
In there, I saw various castles and traditional clothes.
The most impressive experience is that I ate aligator meat in there. It\'s taste was similar with chicken.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Thank you for doing your homework.:) Have a blast weekend!
~T.Annie
1. First, I think my friends are very important for my happiness, because I like to talk a lot with them.
>>First, I think my friends are very important to my happiness, because I like to talk a lot with them.
When I spend time with my friends, they make me comfortable and happy, talking funny stories to me.
>>When I spend time with my friends, they make me comfortable and happy, tel[이름]g me funny stories.
Second, outcomes that I made such as my exam scores or drawings. They help me to think \'I\'m valuable person.\'
>>Second, outcomes that I made, such as my exam scores or drawings. They help me to think, I\'m a valuable person.
2. I have been Thailand with my family when I was in elementary school.
2. I have been Thailand with my family when I was in elementary school.
>> I went to Thailand with my family when I was in elementary school.
In there, I saw various castles and traditional clothes.
In there, I saw various castles and traditional clothes.
>>There, I saw various castles and traditional clothes.
The most impressive experience is that I ate aligator meat in there. It\'s taste was similar with chicken.
The most impressive experience is that I ate aligator meat in there. It\'s taste was similar with chicken.
>>The most impressive experience is that I ate alligator meat in there. Its taste was similar to chicken\'s.
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