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2022-05-09 · 첨삭 강사 Roanne

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Sure !! >_< But.. I think it will cost money a lot. Then If I can go to the moon, I will take a lot of picture. And I want to try space meal..! I am [Name] curious about how does it taste? I want to go there before I die.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!

Wow! I guess you are brave and adventurous. It would really be fun to give it a try one day.

Thank you for sharing!

~T. Roanne ^_^

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Sure !! >_<

>> Correct!
But.. I think it will cost money a lot.

>> Correct! OR But, I think it will cost a lot of money.
Then If I can go to the moon, I will take a lot of picture.

>> Then If I can go to the moon, I will take a lot of pictures.

And I want to try space meal..!

>> And I want to try the space meal!
I am [Name] curious about how does it taste?

>> I\'m extremely curious about its taste.
I want to go there before I die.

>> Correct!

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