homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK:
If you could try any physical sports, what would it be? Answer in a few sentences
if I could, I try to play a badminton. When I was a high school student, I used to enjoyed a badminton with my friends during lunch break times to lose weight. It\'s rules are not complicated, so we can do it easily.
I am always happy to start Monday with you. Thank you Donna!
강사 첨삭
Good evening, [이름] Ju!
Badminton is a very active sports that needs agility and strength aside from precision and accuracy. I hope that you can be able to play it again soon. I want to try it as well to lose weight.
Kindly go over the grammar suggestions carefully. Great job on your homework, [이름] Ju! I am always happy to have class with you all the time. Thank you for the kind words always.
-T. Donna =)
>> If I could, I would try to play badminton.
When I was a high school student, I used to enjoyed a badminton with my friends during lunch break times to lose weight.
>> When I was a high school student, I used to enjoy badminton with my friends during lunch break to lose weight.
It\'s rules are not complicated, so we can do it easily.
>> Correct!
I am always happy to start Monday with you. Thank you Donna!
I am always happy to start Monday with you. Thank you Donna!
>> Correct!
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