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I went a lot of amusement parks..!
Diseny lend in Hongkong and Japen.
And universial studios in Japen ..
and a few month ago, I went to everlend in korea
I love to ride a lot of things!!
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Hi, [이름]!
Wow! You\'ve been to many amusement parks. I guess you really enjoy taking the rides. I hope you can go to one again soon.
Thank you for sharing and talk to you tomorrow!
~T. Roanne ^_^
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I went a lot of amusement parks..!
>> I went a lot of amusement parks!
Diseny lend in Hongkong and Japen.
Diseny lend in Hongkong and Japen.
>> I have been to Disneyland Hongkong and Japan and Universal Studios in Japan, too.
and a few month ago, I went to everlend in korea
>> A few months ago, I went to Everland in Korea
I love to ride a lot of things!!
I love to ride a lot of things!!
>> Correct!
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