homework
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HOMEWORK :
What is your favorite genre of music? Answer in a few sentences.
I love a variety of genre of music. But if I have to choose one, Especially I like pop. Recently, I liked Harry style\'s new song. He is special because he\'s song inspire many people in the world.
Keep safe too Donna. See you!
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Hi there again, [이름] Ju!
This is great to know! I never thought that you would have a penchant for British/Western pop music. I love Harry Styles too because he is the most handsome One Direction member for me. ^^
Well, music is a part of our daily lives. It is in commercials that we hear, in the cafe, or just when we sing a few lines to make our day better or remember a melody.
Thank you for this homework answer! Your grammar and ideas go very well together. Study my suggestions carefully.
See you on Friday! Enjoy your day!
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
Keep safe too Donna. See you!
But if I have to choose one, Especially I like pop.
>> Correct!
Or: But if I have to choose one, especially, I like pop.
: But if I have to choose one, I like pop especially.
Recently, I liked Harry style\'s new song.
>> Correct!
Or: Harry Styles
He is special because he\'s song inspire many people in the world.
>> He is special because his songs inspire many people in the world.
Keep safe too Donna. See you!
>> Correct!
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