homework

2012-03-02 · 첨삭 강사 Lorraine

학생이 쓴 원문

sorry, It is difficult. My anwser is : I live in japan with my husband, paul. I am a teacher, and paul is a journalist. we live in a flat near the centre of tokyo. It is very expensive. Paul work a home. He read and write a lot. He has a computer. I work in a language school in tokyo. we have a car, but i don't drive to work. I walk. At weekends, Paul play football, and I go swimming. on saturday evenings, we go to the cinema, or sometimes we cook dinner for our friends.

강사 첨삭

Aloha Lisa!   Splendid  job! You almost got a perfect score in your homework. Keep on trying my dear. Please continue to be a diligent student. I really appreciate that you\'re taking time to study the words we used in our class. See you on our class later! Take care! :) ~Teacher Lorraine~   Please remember that proper nouns always start in a capital letter. Ex. Korea, Japan, Lisa, Lorraine sorry, It is difficult. >> Sorry, it is difficult. (Capitalization) My anwser is : >>Correct! :) I live in japan with my husband, paul. >> Correct! I am a teacher, and paul is a journalist. >> Correct! we live in a flat near the centre of tokyo. >>Correct! It is very expensive. >> Correct! Paul work a home. >> Paul works at home. (Singular noun takes a singular verb. The verb to be used should have an \"s\" at the end.) He read and write a lot. >> He reads and write a lot. He has a computer. >> Correct! I work in a language school in tokyo. >> Correct! we have a car, but i don\'t drive to work. I walk. >> Correct! At weekends, Paul play football, and I go swimming. >> At weekends, Paul plays football, and I go swimming. on saturday evenings, we go to the cinema, or sometimes we cook dinner for our friends. >> Correct!

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