homework
학생이 쓴 원문
sorry, It is difficult. My anwser is : I live in japan with my husband, paul. I am a teacher, and paul is a journalist. we live in a flat near the centre of tokyo. It is very expensive. Paul work a home. He read and write a lot. He has a computer. I work in a language school in tokyo. we have a car, but i don't drive to work. I walk. At weekends, Paul play football, and I go swimming. on saturday evenings, we go to the cinema, or sometimes we cook dinner for our friends.
강사 첨삭
Aloha Lisa!
Splendid job! You almost got a perfect score in your homework. Keep on trying my dear. Please continue to be a diligent student. I really appreciate that you\'re taking time to study the words we used in our class. See you on our class later! Take care! :)
~Teacher Lorraine~
Please remember that proper nouns always start in a capital letter.
Ex. Korea, Japan, Lisa, Lorraine
sorry, It is difficult.
>> Sorry, it is difficult. (Capitalization)
My anwser is :
>>Correct! :)
I live in japan with my husband, paul.
>> Correct!
I am a teacher, and paul is a journalist.
>> Correct!
we live in a flat near the centre of tokyo.
>>Correct!
It is very expensive.
>> Correct!
Paul work a home.
>> Paul works at home. (Singular noun takes a singular verb. The verb to be used should have an \"s\" at the end.)
He read and write a lot.
>> He reads and write a lot.
He has a computer.
>> Correct!
I work in a language school in tokyo.
>> Correct!
we have a car, but i don\'t drive to work. I walk.
>> Correct!
At weekends, Paul play football, and I go swimming.
>> At weekends, Paul plays football, and I go swimming.
on saturday evenings, we go to the cinema, or sometimes we cook dinner for our friends.
>> Correct!
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