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Of course that my family is healthy and happy.
Exept this. . I .want to meet Jiny
Than I will wish three wishes . LoL
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Hi, [이름]!
Oh, that is so sweet of you! By the way, who is Jiny? Is she your favorite artist? I would like to know more about it in the class.
Thank you for sharing!
~T. Roanne ^_^
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Of course that my family is healthy and happy.
>> Correct! OR I would like to wish for my family\'s health and happiness.
Exept this. . I .want to meet Jiny
Exept this. . I .want to meet Jiny
>> Except this, I also want to meet Jiny. OR Except this, I also want to meet Jiny.
Than I will wish three wishes . LoL
Than I will wish three wishes . LoL
>> Then I will make three wishes. LOL
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