HOMEWORK:
학생이 쓴 원문
How are you going to decline ‎someone if he/she is borrowing a big money from you?
If someone ask me lend a big money, and I have to decline that, My response will depend on what situation or who the person is that.
If I am willing to but don\'t have any money to lend, then I just have to say sorry,
However, If that man is not a believable person, or is not my closest friend, than I won\'t lend him any money. And I\'ll recommend him to ask other person or go to a bank.
I know It\'s harsh, but I am not a reach person too. Before you help someone else, you have help yourself first. Helping others thoughtlessly, will make you be a person who need a help.
강사 첨삭
Happy Monday Jane!
Thank you for letting me know your thoughts through your homework. I totally agree with your point, being honest to someone for not lending him/her some money would also save a relationship. Please take not on those minimal corrections that I made on your sentences.
Have a great day!
Aki~
If someone ask me lend a big money, and I have to decline that, My response will depend on what situation or who the person is that.
>>> If someone asks me to lend a big money, and I have to decline that, my response will depend on what situation or who the person is.
If I am willing to but don\'t have any money to lend, then I just have to say sorry,
>>> CORRECT
However, If that man is not a believable person, or is not my closest friend, than I won\'t lend him any money.
>>> However, If that man is not a believable person, or is not my closest friend, then I won\'t lend him any money.
>>> However, If that man is untrustworthy person, or is not my closest friend, then I won\'t lend him any money.
And I\'ll recommend him to ask other person or go to a bank.
>>> And I\'ll recommend him to ask another person or go to a bank.
I know It\'s harsh, but I am not a reach person too. Before you help someone else, you have help yourself first.
>>> I know It\'s harsh, but I am not a rich person too. Before you help someone else, you have to help yourself first.
Helping others thoughtlessly, will make you be a person who need a help
>>> Helping others thoughtlessly will make you be a person who needs more help.
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