homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK:
What kind of music don\'t you like? Answer in a few sentences.
I like varied kinds of music. But I don\'t prefer k - hip hop so much. Some of them are fine but others feel noise to me.
Enjoy weekend too Donna! Thank you.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, [이름] Ju!
I truly understand why you feel this way because I have the same feeling about this kind of music. If it were just a small part of the song, it is alright but then, having all the lyrics in a rap can be challenging to comprehend and confusing to hear.
Anyway, let us till respect the makers of this kind of music. Thank you for the correct sentences you have made! There are only a few and grammar suggestions I made and they are pretty simple. Kindly go over them carefully.
Have a blast this weekend! See you soon!
-T. Donna =)
I like varied kinds of music.
>> Correct!
But I don\'t prefer k - hip hop so much.
>> Correct!
Or: But I don\'t prefer K - Hip Hop so much.
>> Correct!
Some of them are fine but others feel noise to me.
>> Some of them are fine but others feel noisy for me.
Enjoy weekend too Donna! Thank you.
>> Enjoy the weekend too Donna! Thank you.
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