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Should poor people be punished for stealing if they are stealing to feed their families?
Of course. Because It is a crime. They need to be punished less, but it doesn\'t tell they don\'t be punished. The punishment must be done to every criminal regardless economic environment. If they don\'t have money, they don\'t steal, they just work.
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Yes, a crime is a crime. The law excuses no one.
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Of course. Because It is a crime.
>> Of course because it is a crime.
They need to be punished less, but it doesn\'t tell they don\'t be punished.
>> They need to be punished but not as severe as other criminals.
The punishment must be done to every criminal regardless economic environment.
>> Every criminal should be punished regardless of their reasons.
If they don\'t have money, they don\'t steal, they just work.
>> If they don\'t have money, they shouldn\'t steal but work instead.
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