homework &
학생이 쓴 원문
1) If you COME with me, I will do the shopping with you.
2) Walter will help his mother in the garden if she READS him a story this evening.
3) If it rains, I WILL STAY at home.
4) Our teacher WILL BE happy if we will learn the poem by heart.
5) If they HAD enough money, they will buy a new car.
I didn't go to work yesterday.
Because it's a national holiday, Independence Movement Day.
It has something to do with our colonial history.
The Korea was Japan's colony.
0n March 1st 1919, All of Koreans spiled into the street, flying the Korean's flag and crying "Hurray" to fight for the independece of Our contry.
They could not win against Japan. But their spirit have been lasted until now.
We respect all of them fighted for indepence.
Yesterday is the day for them.
강사 첨삭
Hello Miss. [Name], thank you so much for making your homework once again..
I always appreciate you doing your homework even though you are very busy most of the time.
Thank you so much Miss. [Name].. :)
can\'t wait to talk to you again Miss. [Name]..
Teacher Cam^^
1) If you COME with me, I will do the shopping with you.
>>correct2) Walter will help his mother in the garden if she READS him a story this evening.
>>correct3) If it rains, I WILL STAY at home. >>correct4) Our teacher WILL BE happy if we will learn the poem by heart.
>>correct5) If they HAD enough money, they will buy a new car.>>correctI didn\'t go to work yesterday.>>correctBecause it\'s a national holiday, Independence Movement Day.
>>Because it was our national holiday, the Independence Movement day.It has something to do with our colonial history.
>>correctThe Korea was Japan\'s colony.
>>Korea was Japan\'s colony.0n March 1st 1919, All of Koreans spiled into the street, flying the Korean\'s flag and crying \"Hurray\" to fight for the independece of Our contry.
>>On March 1st 1919, many Korean people gathered on the street, carrying their Korean flag and shouting HURRAY to fight for the independence of our country.They could not win against Japan. But their spirit have been lasted until now.
>>They couldn\'t win over Japan but their spirit is present and lasted til now.We respect all of them fighted for indepence.
>>We respect all of them who fought for our Independence.Yesterday is the day for them.
>>Yesterday was a special day for them.
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