homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK:
What kind of job will give you so much happiness? Answer in a few sentences.
I love learning, passion and sharing. learning new thing and passion to move stimulates me. Moreover, I can give people what I take lesson. so, the job included three essential make me happy.
Thank you Donna! Take care evening.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름] Ju!
When you find the three elements of love for learning, passion, and sharing, you have to apply for this job and you will never have to work so hard in your life. When we enjoy what we do, happiness comes so easily and we can overcome adversities at work. I hope that you can find this soon!
Thank you very much to all of your hard work and passion in doing your tasks in class.
Have a great night! See you!
-T. Donna =)
>> I love learning and passionate about sharing.
learning new thing and passion to move stimulates me.
>> Learning new things and passion to move stimulates me.
Moreover, I can give people what I take lesson.
>> Moreover, I can give people what lessons I have learned.
so, the job included three essential make me happy.
>> So, the job included these three essentials make me happy.
Thank you Donna! Take care evening.
Thank you Donna! Take care evening.
>> Thank you Donna! Take care this evening.
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