Homework(11월 14일)

2012-11-16 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

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Hi, Cam! Good afternoon! But I didn't understand what happened yesterday! Actually, I was outside in my class time. So I had my phone and check it to receive your call. But I didn't receive your call at 7:30 When my class time is closed, I was in the subway station. When you called me at 7:40, I took the subway so I couldn't receive it. And I check the web site, I saw your call to try to me. It's so weird. What happened us. Maybe my phone did not work, I guess. Anyway it's ok! See you on time^^ Homework Duck - noun Bathe - verb Bath - noun Impressive - adjective Impressed - adjective Thank you^^

강사 첨삭

Hello Sir [이름], good afternoon! Thank you so much for doing your homework.. Hmmm,,that was really weird..Maybe there was something wrong with your phone..I\'m so sorry for that Sir.. Cant wait to talk to you again my dear.. xoxoTeacher Cam^^ Hi, Cam! Good afternoon!>>correctBut I didn\'t understand what happened yesterday!>>correctActually, I was outside in my class time.>>Actually I was outside when you called me.So I had my phone and check it to receive your call.>>correctBut I didn\'t receive your call at 7:30>>correctWhen my class time is closed, I was in the subway station.>>After our class I was in the subway station.When you called me at 7:40, I took the subway so I couldn\'t receive it.>>correctAnd I check the web site, I saw your call to try to me.>>And I checked the website and saw that you called me.It\'s so weird. What happened us. >>It was so weird, what happened?Maybe my phone did not work, I guess.>>correctAnyway it\'s ok! See you on time^^>>correctHomeworkDuck - noun >>correctBathe - verb >>correctBath - noun >>correctImpressive - adjective >>correctImpressed - adjective >>correctThank you^^ >>correct

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