Homework(12/05): Tense

2016-12-06 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

학생이 쓴 원문

Friend Jen. Thanks for you to understand my mind about our country's situation. I am very happy but on the other hands I am worried whether the ruling party may have another bad plan in order to get rid of this situation. Many people don't want to even hear voice of president. me too... See you on Wednesday. = BODY = 1. Why are you looking at her like that? 2. Somebody let the cat in. 3. The old woman lost her marbles. 4. Tom was too scared to talk. 5. Where have you been all this while? 6. She needs to talk to a therapist. 7. I called him because I wanted to talk. 8. She is earning a six figure salary. 9. You don’t look happy to see me. 10. Somebody has stolen my keys.

강사 첨삭

Hello Oh,

I would always appreciate the kindness and optimism you\'ve shown.  In addition, you always acknowledge and listen to
corrections given to you. Keep doing that because it would help you a lot to improve faster.

Thank you for your homework.

Always Smile!!!

T. Jeny


Friend Jen.
>>correct
Thanks for you to understand my mind about our country\'s situation.

>>Thanks for understanding my point of view about our country\'s situation.
 I am very happy but on the other hands I am worried whether the ruling party may have another bad plan in order to get rid of this situation.

>> I am very happy but on the other hand, I am worried whether the ruling party may have another bad plan in order to get rid of this situation.
 Many people don\'t want to even hear voice of president. me too...
>>Many people don\'t want to even hear the voice of the president..... me too...
See you on Wednesday.
>>correct
= BODY =
1. Why are you looking at her like that?
>>correct
2. Somebody let the cat in.
>>Somebody has let the cat in.
3. The old woman lost her marbles.
>> The old woman has lost her marbles.
4. Tom was too scared to talk.
>>correct
5. Where have you been all this while?
>>correct
6. She needs to talk to a therapist.
>>correct
7. I called him because I wanted to talk.
>>correct
8. She is earning a six figure salary.
>>She earns a six figure salary.
9. You don’t look happy to see me.
>>correct
10. Somebody has stolen my keys.

>>correct

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