Homework(12/07): Essay about Stress

Hello Oh!!!

I agree with you that it depends upon a person on how he deals with stress. We just have to encourage one another to fight troubles and problems in life.

Have a great day!!!

T. Jeny

 happy midweek, Jen !!
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I think stress is not good, unuseful and innecessary.

>>I think stress is not good, useless and unnecessary.
 It is widely perceived as an origin of all illnesses such as obesity , hair loss and depression. 

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 I also completely agree to it.
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In women, post-natal stress causes many women to become depressed, even suicide.

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 In addition, they eat and eat so much that they eventually become fat.

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 I have seen many such cases.

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 I think that a stress is key reason of all of these.
>>I think that stress is a key reason of all of these.
In the case of men, many men suffer from hair loss due to extreme stress.

>>In the men\'s case, many men suffer from hair loss due to extreme stress.
I think that hair loss may be a genetic factor, but the stress is also important reasons.

>>I think that hair loss may be a genetic factor, but stress is also one of the reasons.
But every point in life is a continuation of stress.

>>Everything in life is coupled with stress.
 A stress is everywhere.
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To do overcome this, We need constant efforts to avoid stress and stress depends on our mind.

>>To overcome this,  we need constant effort to avoid stress and stress depends on our mind.