homework 12/07 : To leader of country.
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello Oh,
Don\'t worry about me, I will be fine, but thank you for the concern.
Friend Jeny.
>>correct
It was nice to see you today.
>>correct
But I am worry about your runny nose.
>>But I am worried about your runny nose.
Please take care of your health.
>>correct
= body ==
I want to give a leader of country only 1 advise.
>>I want to give the leader of the country only 1 advise.
Don\'t forget famous Lincoln\'s The Gettysburg Address, \"Government of the people, by the people, for the people shall not perish from the earth\".
>>correct
But now, most of leaders use the word \"people\" only when elections.
>>But now, most of leaders use the word \"people\" only on elections.
After election, they think people as only ignorant slaves and as objective of reigning over and ruling them.
>>After election, they look at people as ignorant slaves and as an objective of reigning over and ruling them.
A leader of country is not a career or job, but a honor.
>>A leader of a country is not a career or job, but an honor.
A leader of country should serve the people and should fear the people.
>>A leader of a country should serve and fear the people.
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