homework 12.08
학생이 쓴 원문
~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What is the biggest political issue in your country right now?
I don\'t know well about politics yet.
It\'s not long since I get the vote, so I feel politics is difficult.
Instead, I watched so far many people fighting because of their political orientation.
But, there are still many acts that I hate the most because of politics.
It\'s about forcing political orientation to young people or other people.
An example of this is when I was a student.
School teachers have an organization between teachers.
The organization problem is that political orientation is one-side.
So, sometimes some teacher who is passionate about politics is tell unbalanced story to students.
I don\'t think these people are mature and wise.
강사 첨삭
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~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What is the biggest political issue in your country right now?
I don\'t know well about politics yet.
Please answer the question:
What is the biggest political issue in your country right now?
I don\'t know well about politics yet.
>> CORRECT!
It\'s not long since I get the vote, so I feel politics is difficult.
It\'s not long since I get the vote, so I feel politics is difficult.
>> It\'s not long since I get to vote, so I feel politics is difficult.
Instead, I watched so far many people fighting because of their political orientation.
>> CORRECT!
But, there are still many acts that I hate the most because of politics.
But, there are still many acts that I hate the most because of politics.
>> CORRECT!
It\'s about forcing political orientation to young people or other people.
It\'s about forcing political orientation to young people or other people.
>> CORRECT!
An example of this is when I was a student.
An example of this is when I was a student.
>> CORRECT!
School teachers have an organization between teachers.
School teachers have an organization between teachers.
>> CORRECT!
The organization problem is that political orientation is one-side.
The organization problem is that political orientation is one-side.
>> The organization\'s problem is that their political orientation is one-sided.
So, sometimes some teacher who is passionate about politics is tell unbalanced story to students.
>> So, sometimes some teachers who are passionate about politics tell unbalanced story to students.
I don\'t think these people are mature and wise.
>> CORRECT!
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