Homework _ 12/09
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If you see that you are likely to take a beating, what’s the most expedient thing for you to do?
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In the company, I have a lot of works by myself.
The problem is occurred when I start a new job.
Usually, I likely to take a beating at that time.
I try to solve the problem with my full experiments.
When I entered the company I learned a lot of things from my seniors.
So I try to remember what they say and I think a lot of ways to solve the problem.
Also I think if I am a president of the company what I do for solving the problem.
When I find a solution, I recheck it is possible to solve the problem.
After that, I do a action for that.
When I take a beating, it's the most expedient thing for that.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for completing yet another homework of yours James!
I hope you find this expedient for the development of your skills.
How I wish I can help you with your tasks at work. Remember that if there\'s anything, just about anything, you think I can help you with, please let me know.
May you continue to have a wonderful time, James.
Thanks for sharing!
I am looking forward to reading another wonderful composition of yours.
Until then!
-Klein-
If you see that you are likely to take a beating, what’s the most expedient thing for you to do?==> In the company, I have a lot of works by myself.>>In the company, I have a lot of individual work.
>>In the company, I have a lot of tasks to finish by myself.
The problem is occurred when I start a new job.
>>The problem occurred when I started with this new job.Usually, I likely to take a beating at that time.>>Usually, I\'m likely to take a beating at that time.I try to solve the problem with my full experiments.
>>Correct
OR >> I try to solve the problem with my complete experiments.
When I entered the company I learned a lot of things from my seniors.
>>Correct!So I try to remember what they say and I think a lot of ways to solve the problem.
>>Correct
OR >> So I try to remember what they say and think of a lot of ways to solve the problem.Also I think if I am a president of the company what I do for solving the problem.
>>Also, I think if I am the president of the company, what should I do to solve the problem?When I find a solution, I recheck it is possible to solve the problem.
>>When I find a solution, I recheck whether it is possible to solve the problem.
>>When I find a solution, I recheck whether it can possibly solve the problem.After that, I do a action for that.>>After that, I do an action for that.
>>After that, I act on it.When I take a beating, it\'s the most expedient thing for that.
>>Correct!
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