Homework 12
학생이 쓴 원문
Q. Where is the best place to visit Korea in autumn?
A. The best place to visit in autumn is beaches in Jeju. Because it\'s still warmer than other areas in Korea so you can enjoy the summer vacation until autumn in Jeju. And as so many tourists come to Jeju between June and August, you have to spend a lot of expenses for accommodation and food. But if you come in autumn, you would experience cheaper but better quality of your trip.
강사 첨삭
Nice of you to spend a little of your time with your homework Bomi! I really appreciate it!
WOW! This made me really excited. I hope to save enough money for my trip to Jeju! ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
>>The best place to visit in autumn are the wonderful beaches in Jeju.
Because it\'s still warmer than other areas in Korea so you can enjoy the summer vacation until autumn in Jeju.
>>You can definitely enjoy summer and autumn vacation in Jeju because of it\'s relatively cooler weather compared to other places in Korea.
And as so many tourists come to Jeju between June and August, you have to spend a lot of expenses for accommodation and food.
>>And as so many tourists come to Jeju between June and August, you will definitely have to spend a lot for accommodation and food.
But if you come in autumn, you would experience cheaper but better quality of your trip.
>>CORRECT
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