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2016-12-13 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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When was the last time you exacerbated something? ==> My daughter doesn't want me to go out without her on weekend. Because I am busy on weekdays so I have no time to play with her. So she always waits weekend to play with me. But as you know I had to go to company on last Sunday. She was very angry last Saturday when she knew that I have to go to work on Sunday. It was the last time I exacerbated the relation with my daughter. As soon as I came back to home last Sunday from company, I had to play with her for improving the relation. I was very tired at that time but I was very happy because I satisfied my daughter's desire. And I appreciate your praise for my hair cut,Klein. No one knows I cut my hair except you. Thank you for your attention.

강사 첨삭

Good morning, James. Your daughter seems so lovely. I am dying to see her! How I wish in one of these days, she would wake up early, so you can introduce her to me. That would be so cool! We can also play, if she likes. Do you teach her how to speak English? I suggest as early as now, you introduce useful English expressions to her. That would help her a lot. It may also be one great bonding experience between the two of you. I\'m thinking since you will go on a trip, she\'s even sadder. Please buy something for her. She will be pleased to receive a souvenir from your trip, though it\'s for business. Keep safe, James! Stay cool with your new haircut. -Klein- When was the last time you exacerbated something?==> My daughter doesn\'t want me to go out without her on weekend. >>My daughter doesn\'t want me to go out without her on weekends. >>My daughter doesn\'t want me to go out without her on the weekend.Because I am busy on weekdays so I have no time to play with her. >>Since I am busy on weekdays, I have no time to play with her.So she always waits weekend to play with me. >>So she always waits for the weekend to play with me.But as you know I had to go to company on last Sunday. >>But as you know, I had to go to the company last Sunday.She was very angry last Saturday when she knew that I have to go to work on Sunday. >>She was very angry last Saturday when she knew that I had to go to work on Sunday.It was the last time I exacerbated the relation with my daughter. >>Correct OR >> It was the last time I exacerbated my relation with my daughter.As soon as I came back to home last Sunday from company, I had to play with her for improving the relation. >>As soon as I came back home last Sunday from the company, I had to play with her to improve our relation.I was very tired at that time but I was very happy because I satisfied my daughter\'s desire. >>Correct OR >> I was very tired at that time but I was very happy because I fulfilled my daughter\'s desire. >>I was very tired at that time but I was very happy because I fulfilled my daughter\'s request.And I appreciate your praise for my hair cut,Klein. >>Correct OR (one word; spacing) >> And I appreciate your praise for my haircut, Klein.No one knows I cut my hair except you.>>Correct OR >> No one else knows I had a haircut. Thank you for your attention. >>Correct!

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