Homework {12/15}
학생이 쓴 원문
Theme : Make a sentence using the words below.
1. Her cat is an oriental cat and his dog is an oriental dog.
2. I love crimson color and also red color.
3. Phionix can reborn but people can\'t reborn.
4. Dragon is a mythical animal. However, cats aren\'t mythical animal.
5. She is so mystical. Moreover, she is so firce.
강사 첨삭
Here\'s your corrected composition, [이름]!
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Cheers,
Jean~~
Theme : Make a sentence using the words below.
1. Her cat is an oriental cat and his dog is an oriental dog.
>> Her cat and his dog are both of oriental breed.
2. I love crimson color and also red color.
>> I love crimson and also red colors.
3. Phionix can reborn but people can\'t reborn.
>> Phoenixes can be reborn but people can\'t. [Note the spelling of \"phoenix\".]
4. Dragon is a mythical animal. However, cats aren\'t mythical animal.
>> Dragons are mythical animals. However, cats aren\'t.
5. She is so mystical. Moreover, she is so firce.
>> She is so mystical. Moreover, she is so fierce.[Note the spelling of \"fierce\".]
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