Homework (12/16)
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Ms.Aurora!
The weekend is coming:D (Even though I have a part time job)
Thank you for your favor because you gave me easy homework >▽< (This is [Name] emoticon~)
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In the old days, Korea used to be called 'The eastern country of being polite'. Because Korean believe that good manner makes people comfortable.
Have a wonderful weekend and see you Monday!
Always Thank you!♥
강사 첨삭
Hi thank you for sending me a composition. I appreciate your efforts. I know you can do better. Just don\'t stop from learning and believing in yourself. Have a nice weekend too!=)
Teacher Aurora.
Hi Ms.Aurora!>>Correct.The weekend is coming:D (Even though I have a part time job)>>Correct.Thank you for your favor because you gave me easy homework >▽< (This is [Name] emoticon~)>>Thank you for granting me my favor because you gave me easy homework >▽< (This is [Name] emoticon~)----In the old days, Korea used to be called \'The eastern country of being polite\'.
>>Correct.
Because Korean believe that good manner makes people comfortable.>>Correct.Have a wonderful weekend and see you Monday!>>Have a wonderful weekend and see you on Monday!Always Thank you!♥
>>Always, Thank you!
>>Thank you always.
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