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HOMEWORK:
Please write you answer in our composition site:
Answer this question.
>> Are barbie dolls affecting the mental image we create for our appearance?
If your answer is yes or no, please explain why?
Answer
Barbie dolls is think the same way as a people.
The children think like a Barbie doll is a friends.
My daughter think and act like a friend.
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Hello Charles,
How was your weekend? Thank you for your composition. I\'m so happy that despite your busy schedule you still have time to do you homework.
Here are my corrections.
T.Sheela
HOMEWORK:Please write you answer in our composition site:Answer this question.>> Are barbie dolls affecting the mental image we create for our appearance?If your answer is yes or no, please explain why?Answer:Barbie dolls is think the same way as a people.
>> Barbie dolls think the same way like people.
>>OR Barbie dolls think the same way like humans.The children think like a Barbie doll is a friends.
>>Childens think that Barbie dolls are their friend.My daughter think and act like a friend.
>>My daughter think and act like she is a friend.
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