Homework 12/16 : A memorable birthday celebration

2015-12-17 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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Friend Jeny. I read your evaluation of Nov. I am glad to your generous assessment. I think again this thanks to your teaching. I have downloaded the new textbook "@SENIOR_INTERMEDIATE_LOWER" and printed it today at office. and i will put it in a binder file at home. I will continue to learn English after present course. I will be enrollment soon through the "3+1 event". The event is that If i am enrollmet for 3 months, 1 month is free. in other words I will extend my class for 4 months. Of course, My teacher is you, Jeny. are you ok? = body = I don't remember a memorable birthday celebration. I don't like performing special event at my birthday so much. I usually have a simple event with cake lighting a candle and have a dinner with my family. It's all. that is what i need because my birtday is for my mother's hardship to bear me. I always want to see my mother early died at my birthday.

강사 첨삭

Hello Oh!!!

Of course, I want to be your teacher...it is my pleasure!!!

Thank you for your homework, but I have some questions about it, so I will just ask tomorrow.

Just continue gaining knowledge from our day to day activities in class.

T. Jeny

 

Friend Jeny.

>>correct
I read your evaluation of Nov.

>>I read you evaluation last November.
I am glad to your generous assessment.

>>I am glad about your generous assessment.
I think again this thanks to your teaching.

>>This is because of our lessons in class
I have downloaded the new textbook \"@SENIOR_INTERMEDIATE_LOWER\" and printed it today at office. and i will put it in a binder file at home.

>>I have downloaded the new textbook, \"@SENIOR_INTERMEDIATE_LOWER\" and printed it today in the office. I will put it in a binder at home.
I will continue to learn English after present course.

>>I will continue to learn English after our current course.
I will be enrollment soon through the \"3+1 event\".

>>I will soon enroll the 3+1 promo.
The event is that If i am enrollmet for 3 months, 1 month is free. in other words I will extend my class for 4 months.
>>The promo is that if I will enroll for 3 months, I will get a additional month for free, in other words I will extend my class for 4 months.

Of course, My teacher is you, Jeny. are you ok?
>>Of course, you will be my teacher. Are you okay with that, Jeny?
= body =
I don\'t remember a memorable birthday celebration.

>>I can\'t remember a memorable birthday celebration.
I don\'t like performing special event at my birthday so much.

>>I don\'t like having a special event on my birthday.
I usually have a simple event with cake lighting a candle and have a dinner with my family. It\'s all.

>>I usually have a simple celebration with cake lighting and dinner with my family. That\'s all.
that is what i need because my birtday is for my mother\'s hardship to bear me.

>>That\'s what I need because I dedicate my birthday to my mother\'s hardship raising me up.

I always want to see my mother early died at my birthday.

>>I always want to see my mother but she died early.(I can\'t understand this sentence, Oh. I will just ask you about this tomorrow.)

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