Homework _ 12/19
학생이 쓴 원문
Relate any of your experiences where you were able to strike while the iron is hot.
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In my case, I worried about my English speaking and listening ability. And I had an introvert character, I didn't like speaking a foreigner. But unfortunately I have to use English when I have a meeting with certification institution members.
So I decided that I started online English studing program.
As you know my English ability is poor but I want to speak what I want in English.
So I do a homework and read your comments after the class. I try to fix the wrong sentence what I said but
I don' understand why I said like that. Corrected sentense is very simple and clear.
There was a proverb "The beginning is half of the whole."
There were a lot of problems I speak English but I started to solve it.
It will be a good. experience where I will be able to strike while the iron is hot.
강사 첨삭
Don\'t worry too much about your English communication skills now, James.
Remember that \"too\" is negative. You need a moderate amount of worry, though, so you will stay motivated to aim higher.
Let\'s keep up with our practice.
I hope you\'ll consider my recommendations. Secure a copy of them, so you can check them out whenever you want to.
Your cup is half full now, my friend. Always look on the bright side!
Also, strike while the iron is hot.
We can do it!
-Klein-
Relate any of your experiences where you were able to strike while the iron is hot. ==> In my case, I worried about my English speaking and listening ability.
>>In my case, I was worried about my English speaking and listening ability.
And I had an introvert character, I didn\'t like speaking a foreigner.
>>And I had an introverted character, so I didn\'t like speaking with a foreigner.
But unfortunately I have to use English when I have a meeting with certification institution members.
>>But I have to use English when I have a meeting with certification institution members.
>>Unfortunately I have to use English when I have a meeting with certification institution members.So I decided that I started online English studing program. >>So I decided to start an online English study program.
As you know my English ability is poor but I want to speak what I want in English. >>As you know, my English ability is poor but I want to speak English freely.
So I do a homework and read your comments after the class.
>>So I do my homework and read your comments after class.
I try to fix the wrong sentence what I said but I don\' understand why I said like that.
>>I try to fix the wrong sentence I made but I don\'t understand why I said something like that.
Corrected sentense is very simple and clear. >>The corrected sentence is very simple and clear.There was a proverb \"The beginning is half of the whole.\">>Correct
There were a lot of problems I speak English but I started to solve it. >>There were a lot of problems when I spoke English but I started to solve them.It will be a good. experience where I will be able to strike while the iron is hot.
>>Correct
OR (positioning; punctuation mark) >> It will be a good experience where I will be able to strike while the iron is hot.
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