homework (12/2)
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Good day [이름]!
Thank you so much for your time.
I can say that people should wear smart casual wear whenever they go to work.
It is very important because it is the first thing that others see in us.
We have to be presentable to other people.
See you in class.
Teacher Nina
Not only, but also fashon is important for us.
>> Fashion is important for us.
If I wear good quality suit and It looks good on me, people think \" she is very tiny and clean\" and may be she is a public officer.
>> Did you mean: If I wear a good quality of suit and It looks good on me, people will think, \" she is very respecatable and clean, maybe she is a public officer. \"
otherwise If I wear blue gean and T shirts, they think \" she is normal housewife \"
>> Otherwise, if I wear blue jeans and a T-shirt, they will think that I am a housewife.
>> OR: Otherwise, if I wear blue jeans and a T-shirt, they will think, \"she is a housewife.\"
finally, I think fashon is someone`s language and words.
>> Did you mean: Finally, I think a person\'s way of speaking is also considered in fashion.
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