Homework 12.2 / Abandoned pets
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Due to many dogs found in the streets, some cities would capture these dogs and prefer to eut[이름]ize these dogs since no one takes care of them.
If you consider getting a dog in the future, would you rather adopt one or buy one in your country? Why?
: If I raise a pet in the future, I will adopt abandoned pet. There are so many abandoned pets in our country. And many of them are ent[이름]ized. So I think if we want to raise a pet, we have to consider to adopt homeless pet.
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If I raise a pet in the future, I will adopt abandoned pet.
>> If I raise a pet in the future, I will adopt an abandoned pet.
There are so many abandoned pets in our country.
>> CORRECT!
And many of them are eut[이름]ized.
>> CORRECT!
So I think if we want to raise a pet, we have to consider to adopt homeless pet.
>> So, I think if we want to raise a pet, we have to consider adopting a homeless pet.
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