Homework _ 12/20
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How would you help someone who has been through the mill?
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There are many methods to help someone who has been through the mill.
Someone tell the truth and solutions directly for them.
In my case, I hope to solve the problem by themselves and overcome the situation.
If they have a confidence, they will overcome the situation.
강사 첨삭
Nice one!
I wonder whether you speak from your experience. Now I know who to consult when I\'d be put in such situation.
Thank you for sharing your idea with me, James.
Your answer may be brief this time but it makes a lot of sense as always.
Until our next chat!
Stay safe and warm.
-Klein-
How would you help someone who has been through the mill?==> There are many methods to help someone who has been through the mill.
>>Correct!Someone tell the truth and solutions directly for them.
>>Someone may tell the truth and solutions directly to her or him. (someone)In my case, I hope to solve the problem by themselves and overcome the situation.
>> In my case, I hope they solve the problem by themselves and overcome the situation.If they have a confidence, they will overcome the situation.
>>If they have confidence, they will overcome the situation.
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