homework 12.21
학생이 쓴 원문
~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What food combinations would you like to try?
There are countless kinds of food.
As such, there are many kinds of combination foods.
For example, such as pizza, hamburgers and soda drinks, tteobokki and chicken.
Among the many kinds, these days I like the combination food are pork belly(Korean BBQ) and cold noodles(Naengmyeon).
The Korean style cold noodle is that it comes in cold noodles and cold cold soup is that unlike other noodle dish.
And the taste is mostly sour.
Some people add vinegar or mustard sauce for a more sour taste.
If you eat the sour taste of cold noodles, it\'s reduce the greasy taste of pork belly.
It\'s because the pork belly has greasy taste.
That\'s why some Koreans eat together pork belly and cold noodle or eat with other sour taste foods.
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Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What food combinations would you like to try?
There are countless kinds of food.
Please answer the question:
What food combinations would you like to try?
There are countless kinds of food.
>> CORRECT!
As such, there are many kinds of combination foods.
>> As such, there are many kinds of food combinations.
For example, such as pizza, hamburgers and soda drinks, tteobokki and chicken.
>> Some examples are pizza, hamburgers and soda drinks, tteobokki and chicken.
Among the many kinds, these days I like the combination food are pork belly(Korean BBQ) and cold noodles(Naengmyeon).
>> Among the various kinds of food, these days, the food combination that I like is pork belly(Korean BBQ) and cold noodles(Naengmyeon).
The Korean style cold noodle is that it comes in cold noodles and cold cold soup is that unlike other noodle dish.
>> The Korean-style cold noodle comes in cold noodles and cold soup unlike other noodle dishes.
And the taste is mostly sour.
>> CORRECT!
Some people add vinegar or mustard sauce for a more sour taste.>> CORRECT!
If you eat the sour taste of cold noodles, it\'s reduce the greasy taste of pork belly.>> If you eat the sour cold noodles, it reduces the greasy taste of pork belly.
It\'s because the pork belly has greasy taste.
>> It\'s because the pork belly has a greasy taste.
That\'s why some Koreans eat together pork belly and cold noodle or eat with other sour taste foods.
>> That\'s why some Koreans eat together pork belly and cold noodles or eat it with other sour-tasting food.
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