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My daughter has a many of sociability
A quarrel between husband and wife makes resentment
I don’t put up with the ignominy.
School discipline is vary a rule.
강사 첨삭
Hello Charles,
Merry Christmas!
I\'m happy that your back in doing you homework. I know you have been busy this past few days and I appreciate your effort. Have fun this weekend!
Here are my corrections!
T.Sheela
My daughter has a many of sociability
>>My daughter has a sociability.A quarrel between husband and wife makes resentment
>>A quarrel between husband and wife is caused by resentment.I don’t put up with the ignominy.
>>Correct!
>>I don\'t put up with the Ignominy.School discipline is vary a rule.
>>School discipline is to vary a rule.
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