homework 12/22: Will and Shall

2015-12-23 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

학생이 쓴 원문

Friend Jeny. Thanks for your Commendations. I know my things to improve well, but It's not easy to fix my weakness. I will pay attention in pronunciation, prepositions, articles and intonation, etc. See you tomorrow. = body = 1. I will buy the tickets if you shall buy food after the show. 2. I will buy this. 3. ‘There is the doorbell.’ ‘I will go.’ 4. I will quit smoking. I really will. 5. Shall I open the window? 6. What time shall we come and see you? 7. Shall we get something to eat? 8. Shall you get me something to eat? 9. Shall you be quiet, please! 10. I will hit you if you do that again.

강사 첨삭

Hello Oh! Hello! How are you feeling today? Well, thank you for sending this is. Here is a thought that you may ponder on: \"The object of education is to prepare the young to educate themselves throughout their lives. In our daily activities, we can learn new things. Preparing yourself with all the challenges in life is just a trial for you to move forward. In this way, you will find yourself, knowing that you\'ve learn a lot.\" T. Jeny   Friend Jeny. >>correctThanks for your Commendations. >>correctI know my things to improve well, but It\'s not easy to fix my weakness.>>I know the things thatt I need to improve, but it\'s not easy for me to fix my weaknesses. I will pay attention in pronunciation, prepositions, articles and intonation, etc. >>I will pay attention on pronunciation, prepositions, articles and intonation, etc.See you tomorrow. >>correct= body =1. I will buy the tickets if you shall buy food after the show. >>correct2. I will buy this. >>correct3. ‘There is the doorbell.’ ‘I will go.’ >>correct4. I will quit smoking. I really will. >>correct5. Shall I open the window? >>correct6. What time shall we come and see you? >>correct7. Shall we get something to eat? >>correct8. Shall you get me something to eat? >>Will you get me something to eat?9. Shall you be quiet, please! >> Will you be quiet, please!10. I will hit you if you do that again. >>correct

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