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2011-12-25 · 첨삭 강사 Aurora

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Hi Ms.Aurora! I had a great holiday. I wonder that how was your Christmas :) On Christmas eve, after finishing my tutoring, I and my boyfriend hang around the downtown. There were so many people that we didn't walk forward. We had many foods which are arranged in the street. And today, on Christnas day, we went to 'Zzimjillbang'(the place which has many facilities like sauna, cafeteria etc.) We had many foods that I can savor there. Our purpose is only one, to eat delicious food! We are both a gourmet and a great eater :D Anyway it was very satifying holiday to me. See you tomorrow! Thank you!

강사 첨삭

I\'m so glad that you had a wonderful time during Christmas. Diet usually is posponed during this season, so I ate a lot of food too. ^^ I\'ll see you later then.   Hi Ms.Aurora!>>Hi Ms. [Name]!I had a great holiday.>>Correct!I wonder that how was your Christmas :)>>I wonder how your Christmas was.On Christmas eve, after finishing my tutoring, I and my boyfriend hang around the downtown.>>On Christmas eve after finishing my tutoring, me and my boyfriend hang around the downtown.There were so many people that we didn\'t walk forward.>>There were so many people that we had to force our way through. >>There were so many people that we couldn\'t walk forward.We had many foods which are arranged in the street.>>We ate a lot from the food stalls along the streets.And today, on Christnas day, we went to \'Zzimjillbang\'(the place which has many facilities like sauna, cafeteria etc.)>>And today, which is Christmas day,We had many foods that I can savor there.>>We had so much food that we can savor there.Our purpose is only one, to eat delicious food!>>We only had one purpose: to eat delicious food!We are both a gourmet and a great eater :D>>Correct!Anyway it was very satifying holiday to me.>>Anyway it was a very satisfying holiday for me.See you tomorrow! Thank you! >> Correct!

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