Homework(12/23): Subordinating conjunctions

2016-12-23 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

학생이 쓴 원문

Friend Jen, It was already a year-end. It has been a great pleasure to work with you in 2016. Thank you for your great teaching, talking and correcting. I would like to wish you, pretty daughter and husband being away a Merry Christmas and Happy New Year. May the New Year bring you good luck, happiness , making money and prosperity of your new business. haha Have a safe and happy year-end. Cheers. = body = 1. The children were happy when they received their prizes. 2. The people listened eagerly while the leader spoke. 3. This is the place where we spent the night. 4. Although he tried hard, he failed. 5. While she is beautiful, she is not intelligent. 6. Will you wait here until I come? 7. She will not come even if we compel her. 8. Do that you have been told to. 9. She began to cry after she had lost her golden necklace. 10. They could not come if it was raining.

강사 첨삭

Hello Oh!!!
Merry Christmas!!!!
I wish you and your family love and guidance from our Lord, Jesus Christ!!!
Have a wonderful time with your family and friends!!!
T. Jeny

Friend Jen,
>>correct
It was already a year-end.
>>correct
It has been a great pleasure to work with you in 2016.
>>correct
Thank you for your great teaching, talking and correcting.
>>correct
I would like to wish you, pretty daughter and husband being away a Merry Christmas and Happy New Year.
>>correct
May the New Year bring you good luck, happiness , making money and prosperity of your new business. haha
>>May the New Year bring you good luck, happiness , money and prosperity of your new business. haha
Have a safe and happy year-end. Cheers.
>>correct
= body =
1. The children were happy when they received their prizes.
>>correct
2. The people listened eagerly while the leader spoke.
>>correct
3. This is the place where we spent the night.
>>correct
4. Although he tried hard, he failed.
>> Though he tried hard, he failed.
5. While she is beautiful, she is not intelligent.
>>Although she is beautiful, she is not intelligent.
6. Will you wait here until I come?
>>correct
7. She will not come even if we compel her.
>>She will not come unless we compel her.
8. Do that you have been told to.
>>Do as you have been told to.
9. She began to cry after she had lost her golden necklace.
>>correct
10. They could not come if it was raining.
>>They could not come since / as / because it was raining.

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