homework 12.26
학생이 쓴 원문
~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
Do you think you manage your time wisely?
I think, I\'m not good at manage my time.
In my defense, I don\'t know how to spend my time.
And some days suddenly when the schedule changes.
So, I don\'t think, I\'m good at manage time wisely.
But, these days I make a plan a schedule that is difficult to change.
For example, I spend time taking English class or doing exercise every day at fixed time.
And I don\'t well change these schedule.
The fixed time schedule is not easy to change plan.
So, I can spend more plan time than before my mess schedule.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
Do you think you manage your time wisely?
I think, I\'m not good at manage my time.
Please answer the question:
Do you think you manage your time wisely?
I think, I\'m not good at manage my time.
>> I think I\'m not good at managing my time.
In my defense, I don\'t know how to spend my time.
>> CORRECT!
And some days suddenly when the schedule changes.
>> On some days, my schedule changes constantly.
So, I don\'t think, I\'m good at manage time wisely.
>> So, I don\'t think I\'m good at managing my time wisely.
But, these days I make a plan a schedule that is difficult to change.
>> But, these days I make a plan for my schedule that is difficult to change.
For example, I spend time taking English class or doing exercise every day at fixed time.
>> CORRECT!
And I don\'t well change these schedule.>> And I don\'t change these schedules well.
The fixed time schedule is not easy to change plan.
>> The fixed time schedule is not easy to change.
So, I can spend more plan time than before my mess schedule.
>> So, I can spend more plotted time than my messy schedule before.
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