Homework 12.28
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> Why is English fluency significant for you?
: Firstly, I like speaking and debating. There will be a lot of c[이름]ces to talk with many people in korea but, I want to talk and debate with more various people. I will study English hard so that I can share our opinions with not only korean but also people from different english speaking countries. Also, watching an american movie naturally is the reason why English fluency is significant for me.
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~ T. Tricia
Firstly, I like speaking and debating.
>> CORRECT!
There will be a lot of c[이름]ces to talk with many people in korea but,
>> There will be a lot of c[이름]ces to talk with many people in Korea.
I want to talk and debate with more various people.
>> But I want to talk and debate with more various people.
I will study English hard so that I can share our opinions with not only korean but also people from different english speaking countries.
>> I will study English hard so that I can share my opinions with not only Koreans but also people from different English speaking countries.
Also, watching an american movie naturally is the reason why English fluency is significant for me.
>> Also, watching an American movie naturally is the reason why English fluency is significant for me.
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