homework 12.28
학생이 쓴 원문
~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
Have you eaten any strange food? Explain the food in detail.
These days I don\'t eat, but I sometimes ate strange and weird food when I was young.
The name of the dish is \"live octopus(산낙지,San-nak-ji)\".
The meaning of the name of the dish is \"live(산,San)\" and a combination of octopus.
In other words, it\'s like moves alive an octopus dish.
When we eat this, we cut the octopus and then put it on the plate.
Some courageous people eat this they don\'t cutting it.
The reason why this food is terrible is because of this food\'s visual and texture.
In the case of octopus, even if it cut, all parts continue to move.
Because octopus\'s nerves are not die.
So, even if it goes into the mouth, the octopus\'s leg keep moving.
And, the suckers of octopus stick in your mouth.
If you face the this food at the first time, it will be really and really difficult challenge.
So, this food became one of the foods that, many foreigners challenge if they visit to Korea.
강사 첨삭
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~ T. Camille
~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
Have you eaten any strange food? Explain the food in detail.
These days I don\'t eat, but I sometimes ate strange and weird food when I was young.
Please answer the question:
Have you eaten any strange food? Explain the food in detail.
These days I don\'t eat, but I sometimes ate strange and weird food when I was young.
>> These days I don\'t eat it, but there was a time that I ate a strange food when I was young.
The name of the dish is \"live octopus (산낙지,San-nak-ji)\".
>> The name of the dish is \"live octopus\" or 산낙지 (pronounced as San-nak-ji).
The meaning of the name of the dish is \"live(산,San)\" and a combination of octopus.>> CORRECT!
In other words, it\'s like moves alive an octopus dish.>> It\'s a dish wherein the octopus moves because it\'s alive.
When we eat this, we cut the octopus and then put it on the plate.
>> CORRECT!
Some courageous people eat this they don\'t cutting it.>> Some courageous people eat this without cutting it.
The reason why this food is terrible is because of this food\'s visual and texture.
>> CORRECT!
In the case of octopus, even if it cut, all parts continue to move.>> In the case of octopus, even if it\'s all cut, all parts continue to move.
Because octopus\'s nerves are not die.
>> It\'s because the octopus\'s nerves don\'t die.
So, even if it goes into the mouth, the octopus\'s leg keep moving.
So, even if it goes into the mouth, the octopus\'s leg keep moving.
>> So, even if it goes into the mouth, the octopus\'s legs keep moving.
And, the suckers of octopus stick in your mouth.
>> CORRECT!
If you face the this food at the first time, it will be really and really difficult challenge.>> If you see this food for the first time, it will really be a difficult challenge.
So, this food became one of the foods that, many foreigners challenge if they visit to Korea.
>> So, this is a food that many foreigners try, and they challenge themselves to eat if they visit to Korea.
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