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2011-12-30 · 첨삭 강사 Aurora

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi Ms.Aurora! I did my homework late because today I was so busy. I'm sorry I am so tired T.T I changed this class into 'TOEIC Speaking class' :D Of course I want you to keep teaching me :) Always, thank you! ------- The boss AXE [이름]. So she had to BACK TO THE DRAWING BOARD. Fortunately she can BACK TO THE SALT MINES soon or late.

강사 첨삭

You must really be working yourself out by studying English. Just do find time to get some rest this weekend . I really like what you did with your homework. You managed to connect the idiomatic expressions into one idea. So, just kindly look through the corrections I\'ve made.   Teacher Aurora   Hi Ms.Aurora!>>Hi Ms. [Name]!I did my homework late because today I was so busy.>>Correct!I\'m sorry I am so tired T.T>>Correct!I changed this class into \'TOEIC Speaking class\' :D>>Correct!Of course I want you to keep teaching me :)>>Correct!Always, thank you!>>Thank you always!-------The boss AXE [이름]. So she had to BACK TO THE DRAWING BOARD. Fortunately she can BACK TO THE SALT MINES soon or late. >>The boss axed [이름]. So she had to go back to the drawing board. Fortunately she can go back to the salt mines soon.

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