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2021-12-30 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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Theme : Make a sentence using the vocabulary words and conjunctions below. 1. I to go to Hanla Mountain\'s peak but because of Covid-19, I can\'t go to Hanla Mountain. 2. It is a superstition and many people don\'t believe it. 3. There was good messege in her fortune cookie. and also Anna\'s one too. 4. I am avid reader and she isn\'t avid reader because she read for just art books and magazines. 5. My room is not cozy; yet it is not cozy. ㄴ To. Teacher Jean : Happy New Year! Enjoy the New Year\'s Eve and see you on 2022 New Year Janeuary third(1.3)!

강사 첨삭

Here\'s your corrected homework, [이름]!
Advance Happy New Year to you and your family. Stay safe and healthy! See you in 2022!

Cheers,
Jean~~



                       Theme : Make a sentence using the vocabulary words and conjunctions below.

1. I to go to Hanla Mountain\'s peak but because of Covid-19, I can\'t go to Hanla Mountain.
>> I\'d love to go to Hanla Mountain\'s peak but because of Covid-19, I can\'t.

2. It is a superstition and many people don\'t believe it.
>> CORRECT~~

3. There was good messege in her fortune cookie. and also Anna\'s one too.
>> There was a good message in her fortune cookie, and Anna\'s one has it, too.

4. I am avid reader and she isn\'t avid reader because she read for just art books and magazines.
>> I am an avid reader but she isn\'t because she reads art books and magazines only.

5. My room is not cozy; yet it is not cozy.
>> My room is not cozy, yet it is beautiful. 

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