Homework 12
학생이 쓴 원문
ESSAY:
How important do you think is having a name?
Having a name is very important in a daily life. I realize the importance of name especially when I have to refer someone. If I don't know the name of someone, I must describe him but it has limitation and it is very hard to catch his features. However, you can easily explain and talk about someone with his name. It is kind of promise that all the people make to conversate conveniently. Without name, you have to explain every piece of thing and person then your conversation will be very long. Therefore having a name is very necessary.
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]!^^
How are you?
Thanks for your answer and I do agree that names are important since we use it to refer
to people. It\'s also a manner for respect.
Take care!^^
T.Debby^^
Here are my corrections for you today:
Having a name is very important in a daily life.
>> CORRECT
OR> having names is very important for our daily lives. I realize the importance of name especially when I have to refer someone.
>> CORRECT
OR> I can feel the importance of names when I refer to somebody. If I don\'t know the name of someone, I must describe him but it has limitation and it is very hard to catch his features.
>> If I don\'t know the name of someone, I must describe him but it has limitations and it is very hard to catch his features.
However, you can easily explain and talk about someone with his name.
>> CORRECT
OR> It\'s easier to refer to another person if we are aware of their names. It is kind of promise that all the people make to conversate conveniently.
>> It is kind of a promise that all the people make to converse conveniently. Without name, you have to explain every piece of thing and person then your conversation will be very long.
>> Without name, you have to explain every piece of something to a person then your conversation will be very long. Therefore having a name is very necessary.
>> CORRECT
OR> Names are very important.
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