homework 12

2016-06-29 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Would you donate your body to science after you die? Why or why not? I don't want to my body's donation for science after death. Until a month ago, i didn't care whatever to donate one's body. But it was changed as to read the book ; Entropy Like a book's claim, science advancement provide us convenience but it will be reached at limitation. And science makes a society too complicate. So it is very effective and attractive to use died person's body for human life at now, but it can't give us absolute things.

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Hi there my dear Sun! Thank you so much for sending in your homework... You did very good! I hope you will keep up the good work and I hope you know how proud I am to be your teacher :) I will call you then again baby... Take care and have a good night... xoxoTeacher Cam^^ Would you donate your body to science after you die?Why or why not?I don\'t want to my body\'s donation for science after death.>>I don\'t want to donate my body to Science after I die.Until a month ago, i didn\'t care whatever to donate one\'s body.>>Until a month ago, I didn\'t care whether to donate one\'s body or not.But it was changed as to read the book ; Entropy>>correctLike a book\'s claim, science advancement provide us convenience but it will be reached at limitation. >>Like the book\'s claim, Science advancement provides us convenience but it has some limitations. And science makes a society too complicate. >>Science also makes the society complicated.So it is very effective and attractive to use died person\'s body for human life at now, but it can\'t give us absolute things. >>So it if very effecient to use a dead person\'s body for our purposes now but won\'t give us absolute things.

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