Homework. 12.7 / Biggest blessing in my life
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What do you think is the biggest blessing you have received in your life?
: I think my family is the biggest blessing I have received. I always think family is really important to each person. It affects really many things of people. And my parents love me and they support me always. It\'s a good thing that I have parents who believe me and allow me to do what I want. I will try to make them happy.
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~ T. Tricia
I think my family is the biggest blessing I have received.
>> CORRECT!
I always think family is really important to each person.
>> CORRECT!
It affects really many things of people.
>> It affects really a lot of things about a person\'s personality and life.
And my parents love me and they support me always.
>> CORRECT!
It\'s a good thing that I have parents who believe me and allow me to do what I want.
>> It\'s a good thing that I have parents who believe in me and allow me to do what I want.
I will try to make them happy.
>> CORRECT!
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