homework 12.8 / The law of total happiness
학생이 쓴 원문
How can you become happy again when you are sad?
: Do you know the law of total happiness? It said that total happiness of our life is fixed already. So If bad thing happen, there will be good thing soon. I believed this rule. I always keep in mind and try to think positive!
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Do you know the law of total happiness?
>>CORRECT
It said that total happiness of our life is fixed already.
>>It is said that the total happiness of our life is already fixed.
So If bad thing happen, there will be good thing soon.
>>So, if bad things happen, there will be good things happening soon.
I believed this rule.
>>I believe in this rule.
I always keep in mind and try to think positive!
>>CORRECT
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