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2016-12-09 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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" Give and Take " in our relationship If I want to have good relationship, we will have " give and take ". It means not only "Give", but also "Take". If someone only give something to their friend, that relationship can`t stay long time . so , we think that "give and take".

강사 첨삭

Hello there [이름]!

Happy Friday! Thank you so much for doing your homework.

I appreciate your effort. I totally agree with you.

In order for a relationship to last long we should always keep that in mind.

See you in class.
Teacher Nina


\" Give and Take \" in our relationship 

>> Did you mean: \"Give and Take\" is important in a relationship.

If I want to have good relationship, we will have \" give and take \".

>> Did you mean: If I want to have a good relationship with others, we should know the phrase, \"give and take\".

It means not only \"Give\", but also \"Take\".
>> Did you mean: It means not only giving always but you should also know how to take and vice versa. 


If someone only give something to their friend, that relationship can`t stay long time .

>> Did you mean: If someone only knows the term,  \"give\" to her/ his friend, that kind of relationship won\'t last.

so , we think that \"give and take\".

>> Did you mean: So, we should always think of having a \"give and take\" relationship.

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