homework (12/9)
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Hello there [이름]!
Happy Friday! Thank you so much for doing your homework.
I appreciate your effort. I totally agree with you.
In order for a relationship to last long we should always keep that in mind.
See you in class.
Teacher Nina
\" Give and Take \" in our relationship
>> Did you mean: \"Give and Take\" is important in a relationship.
If I want to have good relationship, we will have \" give and take \".
>> Did you mean: If I want to have a good relationship with others, we should know the phrase, \"give and take\".
It means not only \"Give\", but also \"Take\".
>> Did you mean: It means not only giving always but you should also know how to take and vice versa.
If someone only give something to their friend, that relationship can`t stay long time .
>> Did you mean: If someone only knows the term, \"give\" to her/ his friend, that kind of relationship won\'t last.
so , we think that \"give and take\".
>> Did you mean: So, we should always think of having a \"give and take\" relationship.
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